Don’t Put Animals in Cages! We are learning to write a persuasive text. We chose an issue connected to our unit of inquiry and wrote persuasively about it. This is my published work. Name:ThaiHak I believe that people should stop killing animals and taking their body parts because animals are getting killed or hurt. It is a problem because if we keep hurting the animals they will be extinct. The first reason is animals are in threat because some people use their body parts as medicine or other stuffs. For example people catch bears and put them into small cages. Bears are in cages because people want a liquid from bears that is called bear bile. It is used for medicine to stop a fever. First they put a tube in the bear and suck up the bear bile. The bears stay in a small cage and it is not fair! Second reason is they might put animals in cages for shows and things. It is to entertain people. It is not ok to take them from their home. They will be extinct then there wi...
I do not really get it. I think you should add a little bit more facts. Thanks! Lyna
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